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Independent Weiting：  Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.      

第一篇範文

  Many high schools, both public and private, require students to wear uniforms. I think that such a policy is an excellent idea because uniforms can make things more equal for all students.      

  First, uniforms make students equal on an economic level. With uniforms, students from poor families dress the same as students from rich families. This can prevent envy and jealousy about stylish clothes. It can also encourage students to form friendships based on personality, not clothes.

  Second, uniforms can reduce unequal treatment by teachers. Research suggests that teachers often have higher expectations for more attractive students, which include those students with nicer clothes. This special attention can include providing more challenges and opportunities for these students. Uniforms help teachers make judgments based on ability, not appearance.      

  Finally, uniforms encourage the individual students of a school to feel like part of a bigger group. Their feelings of being together, working together and having something in common are all helped by uniforms.      

  It is my opinion that all schools should have a policy requiring uniforms. Uniforms give every student an equal chance.

第二篇範文

A considerable number of high schools demand their students wearing school uniforms to school. As students have increasingly concerned about their own exsistance, some of what force students to put on school uniforms have changed their mind. However, is it a wise decision to cancel the regulation? I am not a propernent. From my perspective, wearing the same clothes for high school students is of more benefits.

The first reason I want to put forward is since there is no need to have various kinds of clothes, students can save a lot of time as well as money by not hanging in the shopping mall. As a result, they are able to have more time dealing with their schoolwork. The money saved by them surely can be used in other ways, such as going to see a movie with families, learning to play a new instrument, or traveling around somewhere. In this way, students would gain knowledge from the processes mentioned above. The money and time is used in an more approperate and worthy way than buying contemperoraryly fashionable clothes. If students were not purchasing so-called fashionable clothes now and in turn to make an investment on themselves, they would afford clothing with higher quality in the future.Another reason I am trying to convey is that it avoids improper comparision among students. Because some students come from a wealthy family, who was born with all the things they want, while others may have to worry about what they are going to eat for supper after lunch. If students were allowed to choose not to wear school uniforms, the rich would inevitably dress in red and green, while the poor would have to wear whatever their family can afford.

Thus, the school is no longer a place for students to study and offer them the opportunities to change their lives, but a place to show off someone's golden family. It is not fair to make relatively poor students feel like they are inferior to whoever has a better financial condition. After all, it is out of character to add this unreasonable element to high school life.Though the advantages that wearing school uniforms in high school are numerous, we should not deny that giving students freedom to choose their own clothes has some slight advantages. For instance, their own clothes may be more comfortable for them. So students could have a positive mood when they are taking classes at school. It is good for their performance in classes. In sum, for high school students, it is more advantegeous to wear school unforms. Being students, their duty is to obtain more knowledge and improve themselves. Choosing their own clothes can be a distraction.