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 托福高分作文欣賞Integrated Writing (22-3)

在寫托福的綜合寫作的作文時，需要用的是一種客觀引述他人觀點和論點的寫法，而不是考生的主觀認知內容，所以一開始對於托福綜合寫作這部分不懂得如何回答，可以參考ETS官方的範文，那是非常好的學習素材。

三、參考範文

 The lecture refutes the passage’s position that the science of archaeology came across severe problems and limitations over the 20th century by pointing out that the new guidelines actually gave a boost to the development of archaeology in Great Britain.    

 First, contrary to the passage’s claim that a large number of valuable artifacts were lost to construction as construction workers and companies might turn a blind eye to the artifacts and potential sites of scientific value, the new guideline urges any construction mustn’t be commenced before a thorough examination is done by professional archaeologists to confirm whether the site is of any archaeological research interest or value. After negotiation with the construction company and the local government officials, the archaeologists will then put forward a plan to either excavate the site or to build around it.

  Second, the lecturer argues that there is a misunderstanding about who is paying the bill for the archaeological research as the passage believes that the government budget for the archaeological preservation is awfully inadequate. In fact, the guideline requires that all the examination and other related work be paid by the construction company. As a result, the increasing research resources enable archaeologists to conduct their research in a far bigger range than before.    

  Third, while the passage mentions that the number of jobs available in the market dropped dramatically and that archaeological research ceased to be a hobby for amateurs, the lecturer provides evidence to prove that the increasing market demand made the twentieth century the best time for archaeologists as every step of the research would be paid according to the new guidelines. Jobs which didn’t exist in the past, such as examining the site before construction, drafting plans for preservation, processing information in archaeological manner, writing articles based on the findings, are now getting more and more popular.